Friday, July 13, 2007

Class Activity 4

I think that letter number one and number four are the best one because in the introduction it is state where did they got the information about the job opening, and even though in the letter number four is the source of the information about the opening is not written it is still explain where the information was receive.
Both of this letters contain very detail information about the school experience, explaining why they seems to be the right fit for the position. And then they also do a great job stating why the previous experience that they acquired and their previous jobs is helpful for to the employee and the responsibilities that they expect them to cover.
The concluding paragraph contains the suggested information such as the reference to the resume. It also asks for an interview in a polite and not to demanding way. And finally, it gives the e-mail and the phone information to be contacted if require.

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